I really like this one. So please tell me what it needs to be perfect. Is the "a blue rose/ poetry is/ a golden desert" bit too cliche?

  Poetry is
word wind chimes
  poetry is
song without tune
  poetry is
leaves falling
  poetry is
a blue rose
  poetry is
a golden desert
  poetry is
a stormy ocean
  poetry is
a baby's skin
  poetry is
a waddling porcupine.
 poetry is.
  poetry was.
    poetry will be.